I wished so hard on that fairy
Not just for myself
But for all of us
That the future would be brighter
[i don't believe in fairies]
We all have dreams
And as i sat between the two of you
I wanted ours to come true
[i don't believe in fairies]
We were torn apart
Then just as we started to patch things up
We were seperated again
When we rejoin
I wonder how much will have changed?
[i don't believe in fairies]
So much is wanted
Expected
So much could go wrong
But we have been through everything
No point in being naive
[i don't believe in fairies]
I wonder where that fairy went to?
If it will grant our wishes
Allow us a reward for what we lost
Convince Cupid to fire an arrow straight through us
Or did that fairy die
When i said
[i don't believe in fairies]
Author notes
Written July 31st, 2006
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wow i love the ending
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Come on now If you believed in Fairies then all your wishes would have come true its because you don't that they did not Only kidding a wonderful little write and a most enjoyable read Thank you
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Very Nice...
I thought this poem was good because it beautifuly depicted the want/nedd of a hope. However false it may or may not be. Id love to read more of your poems but you unfortunately only have 3.... : )
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Sometimes we wish on things that we dont even think exist because it gives us some hope. I really like this piece, especially the end verse.
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thanx for ur comment nd applause! x
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Like it!
I like it! It's an interesting take on the fact that even though most people don't have a strong belief in fairies or God or whatever, in times of want & need we tend to wish on stars or pray or ask for help from fairies.
Especially love the ending. A very sweet poem.
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