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Without you I'd commit suicide

I was on the brink of suicide,
when I found you.
You completely turned my life around,
when I said "I do".

Our marriage was a total whirlwind,
for those two years.
But when i found out that you had sinned,
I burst into tears.

So I got my act together then,
and you told the truth.
You pleaded it would not happen again,
you said her name was Ruth.

Then something happened in my heart,
that I did not know.
My love for you had faded, because of that tart,
I then asked you to go.

And now I'm here crying myself to sleep,
I really do miss you.
Actually my love for you is deep,
I love you, I do.

Please come home, I miss you,
I forgive your sin.
I want to feel your loving, warm touch,
I've put away the gin.

My love for you is so lovingly strong,
I regret letting it slide.
I'm sorry, you know that you were wrong,
but without you, I'd commit suicide...

Author notes

Not my story, I havn't been married! It's kind of a true story though because I know someone who got married and her husband had a brief affair but she almost couldn't breathe without him. she loved him so much and she let him back into her life and since then they've lived happily ever after (like a fairytale!) and have had two children!! He was then so sorry about what he had done and he was disgusted at what he did to his wife.
Written July 31st, 2006

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  • k8theseer
    August 1, 2006
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    Thankyou for your comment! I like this contest- good one!


  • sherry-star
    July 31, 2006
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    thanx 4 your entry I am pleased too hear it is not your life very sad as I always say once a cheat always a cheat well for most any-way.great write.
    shez