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Stream Of Light

Morning to you, darling,
I hope that you are well
In the moments where things are bleak,
remember to always dwell
back on that stream of light
that lights your journey's way
where blood red petals fall tenderly
to lead you to sunny day
Know that she hasn't forgotten,
and she has a solemn swear to keep
No matter how ebony darkness envelopes,
she will help pull you from the deep

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Written July 31st, 2006

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  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    August 1, 2006
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  • outlawtorn
    August 1, 2006
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    time seems paused after the sunset
    but this rose never fades
    ever blooming in the dark
    the gardens of stone
    the living graveyard has made
    moving within a stream of light
    wading among the waves
    thankful for your glowing petals
    shining in this night
    the petal fallen path beauty saved

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    July 31, 2006
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    What happened? You alright?

    It's for one of my special friends.

  • Yunaleska gold member
    July 31, 2006
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    Aww, sweet! lovely little poem here, Rose. i wonder who it's fore. Beautiful write and...I'm in a bit of pain so I can't really concentrate. heh.