Oh wonders of my eyes to see,
your heart with profound misery.
Should it be in the secrets we share,
deep love but can't and wouldn't dare.
I walk past you, as you do me,
we dare not show it, but we see.
Our past and present we want together,
but forbidden love binds us forever.
Author notes
option 4
I wrote this in 2004, but it had more meaning to my life in recent times.
Written July 31st, 2006
A contest entry
- forbidden love by hardwire.
450 points, ended May 17, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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hmmm i can see that you know how to truely write how to truely tap into the emotions of your audience. you have mad skills mad skills i jus love the way you write jus marvelous tremendous ur work is magnificent
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it's a good poem. i liked the last stanza the most,specifically the last line.
it's a wonderfully written poem. so,thank you for entering,and good luck!
*autumn*
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