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An Angel Awakens

An Angel Awakens

 
and I welcome...





your words spoken.

 



Accentuating my ears
like whisper upon thigh
{spreading wings of ajoite}.

 


Unknown, to this presence of intimacy
Blessed, as if
you breathe my breath of light.



A scholar of intellectual scribing,
reading the hieroglyphics of my heart.


Touching tenderly the tracings of my lips
blending bodies to bones
  of hands and hips.




Concrete- it bonds with beauty
and I surrender,


to the etchings

 

tattooed on this space




              of kindred kinds...




© PlayfulPassion July 31,2006, all rights reserved

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~~~Thanks for reading me ~~~~
Written July 31st, 2006

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  • girl shaman
    February 24, 2008

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    this stricks me as professional.
    the images were intricate & almost ethreal!
    i definatly enjoyed reading this and i really dont have any suggestions at all; its a beautiful piece all on its own and the picture accented perfectly
    thank you for entering


  • N e a r
    February 16, 2008

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    ~
    There's one word to describe this write: DELICATE. Penned with such careful observations and crafted beautifully... the picture also adds effect to the write, because it relates wonderfully. I felt like an angel was being sculpted throughout the poem... magnificent job.
    ~

    Thanks for entering my Valentine's Day contest, and good luck!

    M a r l u x i a


  • leander Moderators member
    December 29, 2007

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    This is a beautiful poem that you have written here I definately ejoyed all the images you managed to capture within the lines and the alliteration is a very nice touch of detail

    Thank you for entering the contest - I wish you the best of luck!
    Leander


  • birch
    October 26, 2007

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    you have a very elegant nature to you. i really appreciated the flow in this. it was beautiful at its core. dusty


  • Animals Rule123
    November 19, 2006
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    very nice writing.you did good on this poem.I would give it a 10 out of 10 becuase it is very nice.You should win a contest!


  • Endeavor gold member
    November 19, 2006

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    Very Good


    Lovely words and form

    A scholar of intellectual scribing,

    reading the hieroglyphics of my heart.




    Touching tenderly the tracings of my lips

    blending bodies to bones

    of hands and hips.




    Concrete- it bonds with beauty

    and I surrender,


    Rick


  • azure85 gold member
    November 18, 2006

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    A very pretty poem, with some unique descriptions:

    A scholar of intellectual scribing,

    reading the hieroglyphics of my heart.

    This is very good, I enjoyed your poem very much.

    Smooshes,

    Moonshine Pixie

  • SoulWhispher
    October 14, 2006
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    great

    This is a great write, I really enjoyed reading it, It was outstanding, I also liked the background


  • HeavenonEarth
    September 5, 2006
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    I might just think about that dear friend..but like you at times I just have pen in hand and nothing flows. I guess I need a little more of him around huh? Maybe one day but right now I'm busy with other areas of my life. Take care of yourself dear friend..I'm off for awhile
    Sending much love to all of your family and don't forget the reunion coming up
    's
    ~Joy


  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 28, 2006
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    Pure Perfect Penning!

    I just had to come back and read this once again my friend, you are such a blessing, and the love you sense within another, as you bring it out and or He brings life and love out more in you, let you both breathe in the light, for I surely feel it all around me when I read your tender, loving soul. Much love Peace, and please send some more of this divine pieces my way! -sigh- You are an inspiration, pen on!


  • HeavenonEarth
    August 19, 2006
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    Well Thanks for the indepth comment there and as far as the petroleum glyphics as you call it. It's written I just haven't had time to post it yet. I wouldn't hold my breath because I have other things on my mind than to post it right now.


  • individuality gold member
    August 9, 2006
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    kindred who - spirits: vodka for me palsease hey i want my hat back, that's my hat you are wearing in your picture, mine had a 50p piece on the end of it lol

  • Simply GG
    August 2, 2006
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    very beautiful piece. Well written.


  • LeafelFaery
    August 2, 2006
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    This poem had a lot of imagination and creativeness. Your poem is wonderful.
    -Leafel


  • HeavenonEarth
    August 2, 2006
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    Thanks Cad! I do have another one in the works about the petroglyphs. Nice to see you grace my pages again.
    Hope all is well in your world.
    Much Love to you and yours hon~
    ~Joy


  • effundo
    August 2, 2006
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    Mucho imagination in this and i like the idea of hierogliphics as they are coded to the few who know how to decode them. Whispers on thigh and lots more gave this one a refined and enriching tone.

    Like it

    a lot


  • xDemonicxAngelx
    August 1, 2006
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    Wow, this piece was amazing... This was beautifully written, you did an amazing job with this!... The picture was beautiful, goes perfectly with the write... Keep up the amazing work! ♥

  • Alli zombieee
    August 1, 2006
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    truly wonderful...

    this piece is perfectly amazing.

    great write, and keep up the good work!

    i love this one times infinity. :]


    Loves,
    Charred Angelxxx


  • neoladyem
    July 31, 2006
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    As soon as I read this was about an angel I just knew I had to read this poem. I really do love to hear about angels. You really have great talent here. Your words were soft and beautiufl to read about. You must be a wonderful poet. I really do like the picture chosen for this poem.


  • HeavenonEarth
    July 31, 2006
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    Thank you Renee always a honor to have you grace my pages and the feelings mutual when I arrive on your pages. you leave me speechless...


    Love ya dear ♥
    ~Joy


  • poetryality silver member
    July 31, 2006
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    Oft times after reading your poetry I don't know what to say in response to how it makes me feel. Just look at what is revealed upon this "awakening". There is a subtle message in the eloquent musing. The "angel's" touch is sensuous yet almost like that of a wondrous dream. Oh! This is absolutely comely! Like something Solomon would have written for the Shulamite woman. This is breathtaking! Your poetry leaves the reader in awe.

    BRAVO!

    Much Love ♥
    Renee

  • Mutterfly
    July 31, 2006
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    Really sensual

    Hi sweetie and wowee you did an awesome job in penning this one. So full of beautiful intimacy, wonderfully visual and delightful to read. Sublime


  • RevHead
    July 31, 2006
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    I could picture that... even without the picture u supplied I liked that, it was enthrauling NMNM


  • FaeryPixieFey
    July 31, 2006
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    Lovely visual piece. Compelling. Robinrae.


  • Angelwatchingme
    July 31, 2006
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    Awesome. Every single word drew me in a little closer. It compelled me to want more and more. Great writing.

  • crystylheart
    July 31, 2006
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    The line "reading the heiroglyphics of my heart" really caught my eye. It's a very well blended line (like the rest of the poem, naturally) and it made me stop and think a bit, amazing poem!
    ~Crystylheart


  • StarEyes
    July 31, 2006
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    What is not to like?!? This is simply beautiful and amazing! The picture, the write all of it! Great job. keep that pen flowing!

  • ausangel
    July 31, 2006
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    beautiful picture and very beautiful poem to go with it. the imagery is amazing. great work. it is as if you made love to an angel and are left with the memorie tattooed to your soul.
    great work hugs ausangel.


  • Obsidian Blade
    July 31, 2006
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    Pretty pic and a beautiful poem to match. Congrats on a fab write that is full of emotion and sheer elegance.

    ~ Dian


  • liquidmindforever
    July 31, 2006
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    Thought provoking

    Visually beautiful. The line "Reading the hieroglyphics of my
    heart" how true...and "I surrender
    to the etchings
    tattooed on this space
    of kindred kinds."
    The use of tattooed brought the
    seesaw down way down, like a razorblade cutting into silk might.


  • Tainted Innocence
    July 31, 2006
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    This is just a beautiful, wonderful piece. I love that picture, by the way. It really compliments your words. I thought this poem was kind of....structured oddly. But that is not at all a bad thing! It's different...unique. And I like that about this piece. Great job. Thanks for sharing :-)


  • Always Deena
    July 31, 2006
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    "like whisper's upon thigh..."
    You always know just where to touch me,and you always touch me.
    Thanks for sharing so much of yourself with me.
    As Always,
    Deena


  • poeticweaver gold member
    July 31, 2006
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    Perfect!

    Wow, truly amazing...Where in the world do you come up with this awesome imagery, what you relay and display on a page, is the kind of write that the readers just want to read more and more and more...Your style, the content, the captivating flow and imagery, all make for a brilliant piece of poetry, and the heart and soul you put into your work shines through like a million suns. Bless you sweet soul, for you truly are a blessing. Big 's and es and es

    -Timothy The Poetic Weaver~


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 31, 2006
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    Concrete- it bonds with beauty

    and I surrender,

    to the etchings





    tattooed on this space




    of kindred kinds...

    Here I can see the universal attempt towards the depth of the unseen to seen travel of love indeed..Great catch here..


  • XxGoldenxXDawnxX
    July 31, 2006
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    Absolutely beautiful, this has a very peaceful feel to it


  • Icry4YOU2mrow
    July 31, 2006
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    geeze nice poem...i likey!!!!! beautiful!! awsome picture!!!!!!!!

    kyles wiffie

    ceci

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