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Don't Look Down

It's OK, I like it here,
Might be strange, must be queer
Never thought I'd still be here...

Living a life in strings
She's crazy for all things
Knows no bound
Smiles on frowns
Just don't look down

It's OK, I like it here
Pretty strange, but I'm not queer
I don't really want to share...

Could be anyone by now
No-one really taught us how
To be free and me
All at once
I know no bounds
(my smiles can easily cover those frowns)
I spin around
But I don't look down

It's OK, I'm still here
I can penetrate my fears
Can't believe I've made it here...

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Written July 30th, 2006

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  • Sean Logue
    November 15, 2007
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    Excellent.

    Well written, like it very much.

  • Wings of Flight
    August 25, 2006
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    I poem that while on the first(and only) read i do not etirely consouly 'get it' but it leaves me with a positive feeling that ones has at the end of a journy.

  • Boiled Candy
    July 31, 2006
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    wow, the repetitive rhyming made it feel like onw of those carnival songs, but a sinister version. nicely done