Every day that passes
adds another century
to the time that I wish
I could spend with you
So I'm sending you a warning
to get rid of me now
'cause every time we kiss
I'm even more in love
My love is growing
and I don't know what to say
other than I love you
You've got a sympathetic smile
and a pretty little face
and I'm the only one who knows
you've got the world in your eyes
and every time you laugh
it gives me whole new strength
I'd fight off the world
just to keep this alive
my love is growing
and I don't know what to say
other than I love you
I walk into your room
pulled in by your eyes
sunscreened smiles
and a comforting hand
a suitcase on the floor
waiting to be filled
You ask me to lie down
and dream away the night
I want to grow old
right here in this room
waking up every morning
with a girl like you
my love is growing
and I don't know what to say
other than I love you
Author notes
This is a song that I wrote to tell my girlfriend that I love her. She's not on AllPoetry, but I played this for her, and she burst into tears. It was the first time that I have ever seen her cry.
Written July 30th, 2006
A contest entry
- do you love someone? by Dull Red.
333 points, ended August 6, 2006, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Battle of Sex ~~ I mean battle of the sexes ~~ GUYS ONLY HERE by Naridill.
525 points, ended October 26, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is beautiful ~ Any girl would be in awe of such words~
Thanks for entering the battle of the sex's contest~ good luck to you!!! -
beautiful. absolutely wonderful piece that has great heartfelt emotion to it. oh sweet love, such a beautiful thing. keep up the great writing. best wishes
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Awesome!
I am glad that you gave finally added something to Allpoetry. I am even more glad that I randomly checked your page to see that you have added something. This is wondering. I like the simplicity of some of the description becauce it gave my mind plenty of room to picture the actions in the song happening. This is wonderful. You and Kate, your togetherness, it's wonderful as well. Good luck. BYE! -
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So I have gone on AP a couple times in the last few days. I saw this comment, and thought it was really funny, since you call Kate a bitch all the time!
I just thought that was hella funny.
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aww...this nearly made me cry too! the emotion you packed into this and what you made the reader feel was incredible. i love the simplicity and how you very well described that wonder of love. plus, your rythm and ryhme was awesome and dead-on. thank you for entering this terrific piece into my contest!
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Love is all we need
This is so beautiful,it almost made me cry too,The power of love,the life it gives,the beauty it shared,This is just so amazing,So powerful,heartfelt and very touching,You guys are forever,Hope we win thise contest....
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