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Sis'

I know...
     You think I'm mean
I know...
     You think I don't care
I know...
     What you say...
                 When you think I'm not there
I know...
     You wouldn't want me to hear
I know...
     That thing aren't always as the seem
I know...
     I Know..

But...
  When I was mean...
                 I was still very young
But...
  I truly do care
But...
  I can hear what you say...
                        and it hurts anyway
But...
  Things aren't always the way...
                              That they seem
But...
  But...

Still...
    I know that you care
Still...
    I know you love me
Still...
    You think I don't care
Still...
    You are my hero...
                   I will love you...
Still...
    Still...
        Still...
                ...

Author notes

i know this isn't my best work but I'm trying to recover from writers block...Please tell me how I could fix it
Written July 30th, 2006

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