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I Just Want Your Love

It's been a long time since I've seen your face
It's been forever since I've been to this place
But something draws me back
I've been through tears and I've been through hate
I've been through the years with many mistakes

I don't want materialistic things
I don't want your money, no diamond rings
I just want your eyes to be focused on me
I just want you to hold my hand and be
yourself

Why are you crying
Why can't you stay
The only thing you do best is walking away
Why are you angry
Why are you sad
I thought you'd be happy when i came back

I open my arms to embrace your hug
I don't want your hatred
I just want your love

Author notes

Written July 30th, 2006. I wrote this after I met my dad for the 1st time in 14years.

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  • LionessK silver member
    July 31, 2006
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    This has a song feel to it... and could easily be put to music. So much emotion in these words..so well put together with a great flow throughout. I would suggest taht you change the font so it is a bit easier to read Thank you for sharing.
    welcome to the site

    ~Kristy