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Echoes clash
    Stories Flash
 Bouncing in my brain        Premise Hatch
    None to teach           Can't quite catch
     One to reach         Truth in what I mean
   Driving me insane         Hair in braid
                                   Promise made
    Husbands Dream          Noone binds the key
      Never Seen
  Only that done wrong        Stuck in rut
      Rotten plan               Bow uncut
      Salted dam          ego battered screen
  Catcher not of song         Paths unbound
                                    Shadows abound
                                  Aspiring to a dream


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Written July 30th, 2006

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  • WarrioroftheHeart
    August 1, 2006
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    yeah don't know why i bother trying to format like this
    oh well
    thanks for looking in
    Bruvva

  • Recluse Writer gold member
    August 1, 2006
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    Musta mista thisun...
    Quite open for interpretation I think.
    Set out needs a bit of a tweek but that
    can be difficult I know.
    Some interesting lines in this one.
    Sista

  • WarrioroftheHeart
    July 31, 2006
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    I always do my love
    It keeps me strong

  • 0darkAngel0
    July 31, 2006
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    always remember that i love you...