When His Voice Comes Over The Speaker,
It Leaves A Loud Ringing In My Ears.
The Man I See I Front Of Me,
The Man Who Is Singing Beautiful Words To The Audience,
Is A God.
The Words He Speaks Into The Piece Of Technology We Call A Microphone,
Seem Like Poetry Rather Than Just Lyrics Of A Song.
Maybe Its Both?
[[Oh Please...She's Not Bleeding On The Ballroom Floor, Just For The Attention. 'Cause That's Just Ridiculous...ly On.]]
Techno Music Blasting.
This Place Is My Heaven On Earth.
If I Shall Die Today,
I Would Die Completely And Utterly Happy.
[[You're Pulling The Trigger, Pulling The Trigger ALL WRONG!]]
My Body Begins To Move In Motion With The Music.
Jumping,
Twirling,
Screaming Along The Words,
Pumping My Fist Into The Air.
I Am Dancing!
[[When I Say Shotgun, You Say Wedding. SHOTGUN! WEDDING!]]
The Beat Remains The Same,
But I Know The Song Will Soon Be Over.
I Better Enjoy It While It Lasts.
[[Come On, This Is Screaming Photo Op......]
He Looks At Me,
And I Am Stopped In My Tracks.
My Feet Refuse To Move.
Shocked Is What I Am.
My Brain Send Messages Telling My Limbs To Move Again.
Its Time To Dance I Whisper.
I Begin Again When The Song Comes To Its End.
[[Boys Will Be Boys, Hiding In Estrogens And Aubergine Dreams...]]
The Music Ends And I Am Left Standing.
[We're Taking A Quick Break, And Then We'll Be Back]
I Begin To Smile Again.
Author notes
Option 6 [Panic! At The Disco]... I Went To Their Concert On July 13th And this Poem Is Inspired By It.
Written July 30th, 2006
A contest entry
- whoever said options weren't good enough...... was lying by gothicchildren05.
300 points, ended September 2, 2006, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wwell this was a great peice. ia gree could of been a little story lol. I enjoyed the read and hope you had fun . BE well and keep penning, you have remarkable talent.
Vsutton -
cant believe you went to the concert...so jelouse!good luck, with the poem.its rad!*
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oh nice
my favorite panic! song too, time to dance
thats right about where the two-stepping begins : )
good work
--rin -
Hey,
this is awesome!!! Love it!!! Panic! At the Disco is awesome. Good job and great imagery. Good luck in the contest.
~love~
*joey* -
lol i got ur group comment thingy i was just helping ya get those points up
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~sigh~ I don't think I could not like this poem no matter how hard I tired. You pretty much used all my favourite lyircs, plus I think Panic!, is just the best. How can I not applaud? And how am I supposed to go see their show if they're all sold out....Your so lucky.
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aww i like this. coz its like a good memory of urs and from the way you shared it - it felt as though we were all there! good luck in the contest! i wish you the best
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xx-Lauren-xx -
this seems like it could be a little story or perhaps a monologue telling us of the time you went to go see Panic At The Disco in concert. I wish I could have went to go see them. I just love that band. lol. they kick ass.....but by reading this, I felt as though I was there but still it's never the same unless you are actually there. I've never been to a concert, but hopefully....someday I will.
thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
-Vanessa-
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