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Wo Dittley

 

when she walked into the bar room
I couldn't change my glance
she had this kinda wiggle
from the front and back
my head it started boppin
I was in a trance
so I though I get her number
While I had the chance

 

I said
Hey diddle wo diddle
oh what the hell
you want to dance

 

AS I took her in my arms
and we moved crossed the floor
her flow was so smooth
I only wanted more
I tried to say I want you
but I coundn't find the words

 

I said
Hey diddle wo diddle
me oh my oh bo didty
oh what the hell
you want to take a chance

 

she couldn't help but smiling
then looked me up and down
she had the come hether
expression in her eyes
by now I had totally lost my mind
so I opened up my mouth one last time

 

and I said
Hey diddle wo diddle
me oh my oh bo didty
oh what the hell
you ready for romance

 

And she said
Hey diddle wo diddle
me oh my oh bo didty
oh what the hell
I guess I'll take a chance

Author notes

Got to have fun sometimes, Since I can't approarch awomen in real life,  I guess I can fumble my way through a poem Like I do in Real life
Written July 30th, 2006

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  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    August 5, 2006
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    This is so cute. Great read. Just funny as all get out. Thank you for sharing. Jeannie D Hunter


  • Abreadcrumbandfish
    August 4, 2006
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    Very cute, and funny! This was definitely fun to read. I enjoyed it, good job.


  • Lord voldemort
    August 3, 2006
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    Wow you have put such sweet words in a rhythm .. and the impact so sweet like a woman's kiss


  • August 3, 2006
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    Is this a woman talking about a woman?


  • Edna Sweetlove
    August 3, 2006
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    I don't understand this really as I am not at home with cool jive talk but bit sure is cooler than cool I expect.


  • Sandygram
    August 2, 2006
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    WONDERFUL POEM

    On this reminds me of that oldies but goodies song. Bo Diddily Bo Diddily Where You Been, Around the World And Back Again!! Sure does sound like you my frined. . I love this write. Always the sweet romantic. It is a wonderful quality to have. Never lose it. You keep dreaming and sharing them with us. They make for wonderful poems. You stay safe over there. It seems to be getting worse over there everyday. Hugs and Smiles Sandy


  • Broken-Rickie
    July 31, 2006
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    Cute with humor. Keep having fun and stay safe and stop fumbling! LoL


  • July 30, 2006
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    Wow!
    you did far more than "fumble" your way through!!
    your poem is absolutely delightful! so cute in the story
    and innocence of your thought process of asking a girl to dance; i could feel your nervousness through your very well thought out and charming words~
    a splendid poem with such sweetness it is a joy to read~
    lynn
    p.s. glad you are having some fun~
    please stay safe and i thank you for all you do including writing amazing poetry~
    lynn

  • dont-4-get- duckie
    July 30, 2006
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    he he this is soi cute... great job, ready to read more.

  • June-bug
    July 30, 2006
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    outstanding, excellentlly funny.

    thanks for the smile Charlie, It is wonderful to see your playful side. Again you talent shines in this piece. I can understand your nervousness, hope she gives some reassurance.
    Edited on Jul 30, 11:02 p.m. because 'spelling'.


  • gullionmar
    July 30, 2006
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    very cute charlie,well written i hope you had a great time while you were away love reading your poetry,have you written anymore to your book let me know ok id love to read it mary

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