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Queen Quorra's Quartets

Queen Quorra wore her tiara
Quipped with jewels galore.
Quite the sight, when beamed with light,
Quartz, pearls, and so much more.

Quorra set out one night,
Questing to find a band.
Quartets of the barber shop type
Quickly assembled throughout the land.

Questions flew from here to there
Quandaries of what to play.
Queen Quorra boomed with her voice,
"Quality is the only way."

Quaking, shaking, and slightly afraid,
Quietly, each group set out.
Quarter notes started to play,
Quorra's Queendom began to shout.

Quantities grew ever large,
Quickly the Royal Gardens filled up.
Quads played jazz, some easy listening,
Quelling the guests as they supped.

Quintessential men were given,
Quarters for the time they played.
Quaint was the evening, as guests were leaving,
Queen Quorra bid them good day.

Author notes

Quorra is the Itallan female name for Love.

G
Written July 30th, 2006

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  • Abdul T Alishtari
    October 2, 2006
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    Dear

    LOL, you succeeded there
    for humor is required
    oh my lady fair
    of hearts of desire.

    AT

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 3, 2006
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    Thank you for youe comments, much appreciated.

    Storm

  • Frogzter gold member
    August 3, 2006
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    mind boggling

    Oh my gosh, but this is awesome.... outstanding and just plain out of this world! A well deserved win!
    Blessings,
    Frog

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 31, 2006
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    Tnanks for the comments hun,I appreciate them

    Storm

  • wtchr
    July 30, 2006
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    Your hard work, thought and imagination have certainly paid off here. This is a great story penned from a difficult format. You've managed excellent flow and continuity. The little vignette plays out IN SPITE of the Q's. Well done!
    Best of luck in the contest.

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 30, 2006
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    Thank you for your comments, I appreciate them very much. This was definitely a challenge.

    Storm

  • Poetryintheblood
    July 30, 2006
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    Storm you have beautifully mastered the letter Q here, thank you for your most awesome entry, good luck Josephine

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 30, 2006
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    Thank you for your comments, they are much appreciated it.

    Storm

  • Titus gold member
    July 30, 2006
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    The letter 'q', a difficult letter to define to as first, if this had been about 12 - 16 lines this would have been a monster of a prize to beat!! but you got there, I must say.

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 30, 2006
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    Thank you James, appreciate your comments.

    Storm

  • Magickal Moon
    July 30, 2006
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    A brilliant write Storm. Great story, great flow, and one quipped with enough Q's to satisfy your quintessential readers. Good Luck and keep writing. James

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 30, 2006
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    Thank you Jeannie. I suupose one forgetting about the letters is a good thing, as it makes the flow a bit better. This was much harder than I thought, lol. Appreciate your comments hun, as always.

    Storm

  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    July 30, 2006
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    You are so brilliant! I am so in awe of your talent. This is so great. Wonderful story I forgot about the Q's reading it, I was so involved in the story. Thanks for sharing. I wish you good luck in the contest. Jeannie

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 30, 2006
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    Thank you Tang. Of course leave it to me to pick a darn near impossible letter, lol. Appreciate your comments.

    Storm

  • intanglio2ring
    July 30, 2006
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    Dear StormGoddess,
    Quite the cute quandry here for Quorra!
    Love the "Q's" wonderful work with rhyme.
    Tang
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