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Ode (On a Text-Message)

Form-bereft
Infirm of function
Your skeleton syntax
Betrays nary
A conjunction.

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Written July 30th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • cabot the brave
    August 26
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    nice little poem


  • RatherImaginative silver member
    December 15, 2007

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    IHATECHATSPEAK IHATECHATSPEAK IHATECHATSPEAK! Would you believe my sister actually had a guy break up with her over a text message? Tacky!

    For being such a brief piece, you've manage to communicate quite a bit. I really like that about it. Your word choice is intelligent without being so highly seasoned as to be inpalatable, and you've flavored it with just the right amount of humor. Thanks so much for entering my contest!


  • TheDemonEve
    July 14, 2007
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    Yeah, I hate reading them too. XD