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Nothingness

Forge into the lonely night
A hollow echo
Forgotten light
Temptation is salvation
A silhouette of time
When innocence was life
No strife
Nothingness

The fragrance still too strong
My many sins
Regretably wrong
Desire is the fire that burns
Deep within my soul
I condole
Nothingness

When the time draws near
Wordless conversation
Releasing fear
I will stand my own ground
And finally admit this
I love you
Nothingness

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Written July 30th, 2006

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  • Shadowed Love
    July 30, 2006
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    Powerfull, mysterious, quite lovely. This is the type of poem I most enjoy reading. Fantastic write, keep on penning!