Closing my eyes where I cannot see,
Our hopes are shattered, no more dreams.
Masked by fears, I can't be free,
Instead, cry out hard, tears in streams
Not knowing what's to become of me,
Grant me strength and still my screams.
Unlock the terror within my mind,
Nourish the who I need to be.
Don't look back, it's where you'll find,
Opened doors to my reality.
Needing to put the past behind,
Escape, coming undone in insanity.
Author notes
Option 7
Written July 30th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Love, Friendship, Etc, Etc. by YoureNoGoodForMe.
300 points, ended August 4, 2006, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i've never come upon an acrostic so nicly written. Seriously!! its awesome. i'm assuming we all feel line we're on the brink of insanity a number of times in this life time... the hard part is to get up and keep going without giving up. God Bless.. keep up the wonderful writing
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Thank you for your comments, I appreciate them much.
Storm -
Thank you Val, I appreciate everything.
Storm -
An intereting read and I like the rhyme scheme you have
used here. A sad and moving write..Good luck in the
contest..
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Ouch! I can feel this one. Very intriguing poem dear one. But I so understand this. You know I love you sweetie, and I'm here for you.
Vickie -
Thank you for the comments, appreciate it.
Storm -
Wow I really liked this! I loved the words you used to describe everything! It kept me reading! Thanks for entering and good luck!
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James, I am sure we have all been there a time or two. It just feels like I am trapped there sometimes. Guess that explains my sick and twisted mind, lol. THanks for the comments, appreciate it.
Storm -
Thanks hun, appreciate your comments.
Storm -
Awesome write. 'coming undone in insanity'. Brilliant. I've been there a time or too myself. Rock & roll Storm. LOL. James
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BRILLIANT jealous
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