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Trapped in a nightmare
Lost in my dreams
Into places that scare
Nothing there is what it seems
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Everytime I go there
In my dream I always see
Another girl with long dark hair
Looking right at me
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Her eyes are dark
Her face is cut
Tears run dwn her face
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Her mood is black
Her arms are bruised
Her life seems way off track
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And when I look close
I am suprised to see
That the girl I'm looking at
she is me
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Author notes
my friend emily(i call her emy lol) wrote this
Written July 29th, 2006
A contest entry
- &&im.your.intoxication by Zombie-x.
450 points, ended March 5, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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it sends shivers up and down my back because i am afaid of mirrors
the thing in the mirror pionts out my flaws and imperfections but that is only the way you loook at it and i know
good poem and very well written
~~Chef W.B
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I love this, its to the point, and it has good descriptions. I can also relate to it. Its fantastic Keep it up!
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which option?
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the 1st 1 i think
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i was wanting it longer to lol but i ran out of time 2 write it and yea i never edited it cuz every1 seems 2 like it this way
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I really like it... i was wanting it to be longer though...
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i love this...it was written so well...i love the way it flows
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really good..sets a tone.....good write....nice post...keep em flowing...
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That is kind of ify... Scary that you would have bruises. But what happens in your life can stay there if you want. It's very good on the other hand. Well done.
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AMAZING, wow i love it!! it has tons of emotion and imagery!! great write!!
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thisnis really good well done i love the ending...fantastic.....mhm...yer well done
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