I see her as she silently screams.
Her voice seems to stay quiet,
as her heart gets louder and louder.
She's begging for a friend.
She wants someone to hold her,
but she feels like nobody is there.
She refuses to see me
and how much I care about her.
She doesn't see I feel her pain.
Am I invisible?
Why can't she just realize I'm here?
What will happen next?
The pain builds up inside of her.
The walls can hardly hold the pressure.
She breaks down as it overtakes her.
How will she get up
if she refuses to see the hand
that is outstretched to help her up?
I love that girl.
She has such a beautiful heart.
She longs for God's will to be done.
I pray she sees this girl
that is standing here
with her arm reaching to pull her up.
Author notes
The love of a friend is such a strong bond. But it is hard when they can't see how much you care and want to help...
Written July 29th, 2006
A contest entry
- Inspirational Love by LovedByTheOne.
300 points, ended August 2, 2006, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This was a beautiful poem, the best thing to do in this situation is pray, and stay steadfast in prayer for her, and always have your had open, wether she takes your had or not, she will respect and feel comfort knowing that you're there for her. Awesome poem,
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i can relate to the girl..well done
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AWESOME
Hey tonya..this is a great poem. When I first read it, it hit me really hard. I know that when I go through hard times, that I don't let anyone in. I just don't want people to know how I feel. But lately, I've realized that I should open up and let my friends know how I feel...well anyways...this is a great write. keep writing. BLESS GOD!!!
~Jen~
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