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Hmmm Odd ...

Every Night i used to wonder why when i closed my eyes it was you i drempt of.
I used to wake from these dreams hot and cold at the same time.
When they ended i feared their return because i knew it wasn't you i should be dreaming about.
But is soon relised that these dreams where a reflection on my heart.
The Feelings cannot be controlled or understood,
But for now all i know is how i feal about you.
I Cant ever not have you in my life because you have a home in my heart,
And without you, my heart will return to its once dead state ...

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Written July 29th, 2006

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  • doesne1care
    January 18, 2008

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    wow

    wow! thts reali gd well dun..c u can write n this is ur talent so b proud n let people no!
    love always kiwi x x x


  • stupid blonde
    August 10, 2006
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    oh, i remember this poem now! i remember writing it! lol

    sorry about the spelling and grammer, i was in a bad mood.

    Banana xx


  • marmalade
    August 10, 2006
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    nice to see you writing again banana! I thought it was quite sad and also rather poignant at the same time as being almost hopeful. Just one point what on earth has happened to your spelling and grammar!