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story of a cutter

Razor
Hits wrist
Blood hits the floor
Clutching fists

Deeper
As it enters the vein
Black tears run down face
From the pain

Cuts All the way
Up the arm
This is the price
You have to pay

When you are
Unloved
Misunderstood
Not wanted

Razor falls
Head hits floor
Heart stops
This nobody has to take the pain anymore

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Written July 29th, 2006

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  • vampyress-miadormia
    July 29, 2006
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    i really like this well done


  • -Tears Of Pain-
    July 29, 2006
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    I liked this piece! I can relate..I know people say that alot..But oh well..I could picture what was happening in this poem...It had few words...But the words it had painted a picture...Great job!!

    ~^Sara^~


  • Just waiting
    July 29, 2006
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    great piece. very moving. i really never got why people cut and i still don't , but i would like to. i just don't think i ever will. any whoo great job with your poem .