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A poem for my mama about the birdies

Birdie, please don't fly into the barn
Birdie, it might do you some harm
You might get trapped or hurt your wings
and then you won't be able to sing
♥
Birdie, remember to have lots to drink
Summer is hot so you have to think
Water is important and that is true
It's even important for me too !
♥
I love to watch all the Birdies play
When I am sad, it makes my day
My mama likes to watch Birdies with me
Watching them makes us feel free
♥
Even when life is hard and sad
The birdies make me glad

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Written July 29th, 2006

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  • rose of Sharon
    August 7, 2006
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    Wow I can't believe you are only seven years old! This is so good and I can tell that you are a very loving and caring person. All who know you are blessed to have you in their life. Good luck in all you do and in all the hard times with your mama
    - with love


  • little-hug silver member
    August 2, 2006
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    You write sooo beautifully Annie !! I'm so proud of you and to be your AP big sister !! Oh and soon you are going to be a real life big sister and I know you will be the best I love how you love nature so much and how much love there is in your big smiley heart I promise I'll leave out extra water for the birdies here. I like watching the birdies play too. Say hi to your mama for me and give her a BIG hug from me too. Thank you for the card too and drawing I love you.
    love you lots like jelly tots
    ♥ ellie xoxoxoxoxox


  • Utok Bulinaw
    August 1, 2006
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    This is so cute Annie! THe birds are chirping outside the window right now and just like your poem, it lifts up my spirit. I am very proud of you and I am sure your Mama is proud also. Love and hugs, Mommy Eris

  • NovELtyACt
    July 31, 2006
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    You are seven, yes? This is such a good, light-hearted poem--it lifts you up! I must agree with the other two who commented, your love and joy shines through your writing--something that is such a treasure. You are an impressive young poet Keep writing, KEEP WRITING!and keep looking for the little joys in life, you will find them.
    Thankyou for sharing.

    {+ Novelty Act +}

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    July 29, 2006
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    You have so much love in you, Annie. People, nature, the world.
    That shines so much in your writing. Your mama is beyond blessed having you in her life. She's more than blessed, more than lucky, more than fortunate, the list goes on. I'm proud of you too. You inspire me so much and this poem is no exception. God bless.
    Love your brother, Brian


  • bleeding for him
    July 29, 2006
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    This is a sweet and emotional poem. I like to read poems like this. I feel your love towards your mom and sort of understand the meaning behind it. You are talented.
    liz

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