Hands wrap slowly 'round
Caressing at my thighs
Elicit from deep within
The sound of pleasured sighs
Your breath befalls my neck
I feel your mouth draw close
Stripping off my garments
My body, I expose
Surround me now, my lover
Take me in your arms
I'm yours for the taking
Possess me with your charms
Wings close in tight
Cocooned within your shell
Held captive in your trance
A hypnotic little spell
You kiss me here, then there
Bodies start to sway
Once at my garden gate,
Your fingers softly play
Sensations, light and teasing
Tingle deep into my soul
Then swiftly, you take me
Pleasures ever carnal
Your thrusting, hard and brutal
I scream in ecstasy
Teeth rip into flesh
As crimson's flowing free
One hand holds me still
One seizes at my breast
My pain becomes your pleasure
The thrill has you obsessed
You plunge in deep again
Ravish till I fall
Explode within my tomb
Suffice your primal call
Your demon eyes aglow,
Lay me upon the floor
Keep me sheltered in your wings
Until it's time for more
Kiss me beastly lover
For my soul is yours to keep
Lying in your arms,
Close our eyes and gently sleep
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Written July 29th, 2006
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Thank you for the comments, much appreciated.
Storm -
I really like the contrast between the images you used in the majority of the poem, and then the softness in the last line.
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Seems you went on a reading spree, lol. Thank you for your comments, appreciated much.
Storm -
That was very beautiful, sensual and erotic.
Very nicely with an excellent rhyme and choice of words.
I enjoyed reading this.
Keep on writing,
Nooni
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Thanks for the commnts, appreciate it.
Storm -
How Bestial, very good poem.
I love the avatar. -
Thanks. As you probably have seen, I am a huge lover of dark poety and erotica. What better way then to combine them? Occassionally anyway. Appreciate your comments.
Storm -
Fucking Brilliant haha i'm not the type to write stuff like this but i like the style and how the picture would really go with it great write
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Oh yeah, definitely the bad guy type. Give me a Lorenzo Lammas from Renegade, and hun, I wouldn't be here for days!!!
Ok, ummm, sorry. Anywho. I see you're getting all flabbergasted, lol. Glad you liked. Thanks for the comments, appreciate it.
Stotm -
Oh yummy, the beast is so symbolistic I think. For me, the 'bad guy' type, um not that we role play, naw, well, um, anyway, great peom, erotic and steamy. Yup works for me, but, hey, I easy, I mean , oh hell, yeah I am easy, heehee!! Great writing. Loved it.
Jeannie
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Thanks for the comments, I appreciate them. My taste for dark erotic is creeping high as of late.
Storm -
Wow.Nicely written.Flows beautifully.Makes you want to feel exactly what you wrote because it's so intense.
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