Inside my mind, I've come to find, dreams beheld such a sight
Within it's walls, as darkness falls, arise the spectrals' guiding light
Surrounding me in energy, are my phantasms of the night
Author notes
Image designed by and courtesy of Sharcu
Written July 29th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Let the Picture Inspire - #3 by Sharcu.
300 points, ended August 5, 2006, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thanks for the comments, appreciate it.
Storm -
Well done to say the least! I liked the inline rhyming and then the end of line rhyming you used there at the end. Great job! Thanks for entering
--Tim -
Thank you for the comments. appreciate it.
Storm -
Great job. I like the imagery -the idea of this being a dream.
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I opened the contest page, and there it was. Just jumped out at me. Thanks for the comments hun
Storm -
Dang this is good. Great job on this, Very effective, yeah I can see it, very well. Good luck in the contest.
Jeannie
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