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My Sister's Tears


She stood in a mist of many battles,
with her head held high, and soul so strong,
She vowed never to stop the good fight for her Lord.

With a spirit of Wisdom and warriors heart
she prayed for peace that we all belong.

With a Mothers compassion she opened her arms,
for those who seek a safe place from all harm.

She offered to heal, to love, to cry, and to laugh.
And for those who have passed over, wings to take flight.

It was the color within her that she clung to with hand,
A women ,unlike all others, but had so much, it’s clear,
it can’t be denied she was part of God’s plan.

I  will always Love and miss you
Your Sister
Lisa

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In loving memory of my sister.. our loss is heaven's gain..Marcie J. Compson 6-16-51/7-6-06
Written July 29th, 2006

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  • iccara
    September 9, 2006
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    thanks for replying to my poem and thanks for sharing your poem.. I liked it alot..Iccara


  • AutoPilate
    August 9, 2006
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    I remember Marcie well and fondly. This is a worthy tribute to her memory. Please accept my condolences.

    - Giovanni


  • WulfDiamondLou33
    July 29, 2006
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    this is vary good. we are all blessed to read this. i loved it. i am sorry to hear that you lost someone. sometimes we feel that the lord takes people away befor we want him to. but to tell the truth god only takes the angels he wants early, befor there ready i guess that means ur loss is a blessing to the lord to have another angel there to hold his hands as he walks.

    God bless

    Diamond

  • Shadow 13
    July 29, 2006
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    great

    Great poem. The emotion and love put in this poem is greatly admirable. Great sympothy for your loss, but at least she is in a better place.


  • Glass Heart
    July 29, 2006
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    Wow, wonderful write. Great wording. Here, this is a poem I've heard

    A heart of Gold stopped beating;
    Two shining eyes put to rest
    God broke our hearts to prove
    He only takes the best.

    I'm sorry for your loss.


  • D reamer ki D
    July 29, 2006
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    Mayb bcoz i`m so close 2 ma sister, that`s y i can get a strange strong feeling out of this 1..
    keep`t up

  • Miss Yorik
    July 29, 2006
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    So sad and touching. It's wonderful of you to share this with us. I never had a sister, so I cannot exactly relate, but I have two older brothers and they are the treasures of my life. God's plan is righteous - and I accept it with love. Again, thanks for sharing.

    Melanie


  • Amber Rose
    July 29, 2006
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    What a beautiful and heartfelt poem. It was a great write. I could feel the words meaning. I'm very sorry for your loss... Only the good die young

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