Like braiding of the chains
the conversational change
riding this plain
swimming through the fog
strobe light dancing never last this long
standing tall
but still sitting down
frozen to the stars
but still melted to the ground
does the floor begin to move
or is the ceiling just dancing down
there's something tickling my brain
somebody get it out
was the glass really broken
or did I just hear the sound
my mind I keep losing
but the taste
it's just so soothing
can I scratch that itch
will my hand move that far
I feel like a computer glitch
moving slow like tar
could this hall be any longer
what's on the other end
my hazy mind can only wonder
I can see the dust resting on my eyes
like the sun dancing in the never ending sky
I pull down the blinds
but the clouds still remain
hey, I'm seeing straight again
I think my flight is being brought to it's end
just when I think I'm being brought back down
oh look, it's being passed back around
Author notes
If you don't understand it, or have any ?'s, i'd be glad to answer them,I hope you like it,& thanx 4 reading my stuff!!!Enjoy the twisted level of the unaware mind!!!
Written July 29th, 2006
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woah this poem is random but seeminly meaningful. i really love the rhyme:
"standing tall
but still sitting down
frozen to the stars
but still melted to the ground."
i love it.
Have a great day and keep writing.
~ dark hidden love ~ -
WOW this is soo random!! LOL.I like random poems.They make one think!!This one certainly accoplished that task. I think you have a really great write here.It has a few loose ends to be fixed up,but you said you are new,so You will get it. Welcome to Ap by the way. Oh and do not think I am ragging on this poem because I am not.I really really loved it.I cannot say much anyhow,as my writes are not exactly tip top either!!But anyhow,thanks for the great read hon.
Love
Krys
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