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Hate Self

We're all each others' Technicolor nightmares
But we all cry the same grey tears
Welcome to a future of social anxiety
[-you'll fit right in to our society-]

And every time I watch children's shows
I cry, because it's sad that nobody knows
That beauty isn't just skin deep anymore
Because when your hideous and piteous
It seeps in through your pores
And drenchs your brain with the inclination
That you'll never feel the beautiful sensation
Of actual love

So, say goodbye, say farewell
And enter your self esteem hell

Goodbye. Farewell.

Author notes

Just been in a self pity mood lately...
Written July 29th, 2006

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  • Evolutionary
    August 4, 2006
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    you use the word technicolor alot

    pgph 2, line 4, "your" should be "you're"

    is it pity-whorish to say i relate to this?

    ah well.. it's very good.. i like the bit about the grey tears.. dunno why, it just brings this crazy pretty image in my head.. such a sad poem.. applause for j00