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Your Turn

Delicate arms suspended;
Handcuffed at the wrists.
Standing naked woman;
Can't control my lust.

Teasing you with a feather
And softly caressing your body
I can feel your arousal
Like a wave emanating from you.

I circle you like my prey
Searching you with my eyes.
I use the feather to touch you
And elicit a soft moan.

I trace your lips with it
And they part willingly.
I abandon the feather
And finger your nipples.

I suck on your tongue
And bite your lower lip.
I surrender your mouth
And suck on your ear.

My tongue traces a line
To your supple breasts.
It circles your left nipple
And then I suck until it's hard.

I switch to your other breast
As my hands explore your ass.
You're breathing is fast
And pants between your lips.

I trace kisses down your stomach
And dip my tongue into your navel.
You shudder and lick your lips
So I move down to your pleasure.

I suck on your lower lips
And you arch your back.
My tongue slips between them
And cries escape your throat.

I lick your soaking clit
And slip my tongue into you.
I move it in circles
And you begin to shudder.

You are almost to climax
So I suck hard on your clit.
You shout with pleasure
And cum into my mouth.

I quickly move back to your mouth
And let you taste yourself.
Before the shock-waves subside
I shove two fingers deep inside you.

You gasp with shock and pleasure
As I move them in and out.
I place my thumb on your clit
And rub as I finger you.

I cup your left breast
With my one free hand
And suck on your other nipple.
Your hips move in a smooth rhythm.

You throw your head back
And scream with your release.
I kiss you as you calm
And you smile as I un-cuff you.

Your lust-filled eyes
Peer at my naked breasts
And you bite your lip.
'Your turn,' you whisper.

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Option 2! Enjoy!
Written July 29th, 2006

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  • mumma
    October 3, 2006
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    mmmm..... well described.. love it


  • Apsinthion
    September 26, 2006
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    woohoo!

    ehem... amazing poem!!!! woah!... yeah..! ... ummm! ... i shut up now!! will go read again!!!

    wow!!!

    ~rana~
    Edited on Sep 26, 4:14 because ''.


  • NooNiThEWitcH
    September 15, 2006
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    Wicked!

    Enjoyed!
    lol that was really awesome!
    I loved it and I enjoyed reading it very much!

    You deserve my last applaud for today.
    Keep on writing and good luck in the contest.

    Nooni


  • xoxkissme3x
    September 14, 2006
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    I am loving this poem!
    great imagery!!!
    good luck!!!


  • Epsilina
    August 21, 2006
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    I circle you like my prey
    Searching you with my eyes.
    I use the feather to touch you
    And elicit a soft moan.

    I think that was my favorite stanza, but I loved much of the poem.
    ~Epsilina Elizabeth Eshilon~


  • XwasteOFpaintX
    July 30, 2006
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    wow! very seductive and sexy! i loved reading this
    great write and keep it up!! [hehe, i wanna read MORE]
    -waste


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 29, 2006
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    Well, ummm, yeah, that just made for an interesting morning. Whew! Hot! And yeah, enjoying, thank you. Very sexy. Excellent work.

    Thanks for entering and good luck
    Storm

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