Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Black Rivers

Missing image
Black rivers of sorrow
Run down creamy flesh
From green pools of hurt.

A salty drop of anger
Falls to the stones
And splashes against them.

The look of tenderness
I have cherished so long
Has completely disappeared.

Dark lines of deceit
Mar your pretty face
And leave me shaking.

Your questioning eyes
Pierce my very soul
And I feel your pain.

As I fall to my knees
Words of apology
Rush from my mouth.

Dark rivulets of remorse
Cascade down my cheeks
But find no absolution.

Your spirit is heavy
With this torment
And heart-ache I've caused.

Baby, I'm sorry!

Author notes

Running mascara inspired me so, thanks.
Image by redletterflight at deviantart.com
Written July 29th, 2006

In a list

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • mascararunning
    November 25, 2006
    Edit | Reply

    Mascara black, sleak- Pain

    thats awesome.
    I always used my username because I wrote so many of my poems in tears. and lol I wear alot of mascara so it's always running.
    I really like this poem.
    Good job


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    September 26, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Your imagery and wording is very well done! I truly liked your piece
    Thank you for sharing and for being a part of my contest!


  • Dead Star--x
    July 31, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    i like this alot! i really do, its so beautiful! awesome word choice, i wish i could say more bu theres no need to! thanks for entering!
    Abused