I am
A kind man
When it comes to loving
Help me up
If I fall down
And prop my head
On your lap
If need be
I’m sick of sunshine!
The Brightness from the sun.
Come sit in bed besides me
But when all
Is depressing
I need anything
Except Nightfall
But especially you
My sunshine, in my life
Author notes
I may have been on medications for the first time, but its about the love for my mom that I have, even though my mom isn't in this world anymore
In a list
A contest entry
- Baby Poems For My MOM by HaleighGrace.
300 points, ended January 8, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - mothers day by honey bear.
600 points, ended March 13, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Memorable Moments. by Poetryintheblood.
375 points, ended May 16, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Thank you for your beautiful entry,
Josephine
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thank you for entering and good luck in the contest with this very good write/dedication for your mother, there is a very lot of love shining through these words, i hope that your mother gets to read and enjoy
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well, i'm sure she would love it. If only 2 things were true.
She lived with me, she was alive.
And other than that, i'm glad you liked it.
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Good write and GL in my contest
HALEIGH -
A wonderful poem that you have penned here. Very heartfelt. Thank you for entering our contest. The Best of luck to you. Take care, Sandy
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thank you , good luck judging them all
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Isn't it amazing how we as teens think we don't need parents anymore but yet when things go wrong they are all we long for...that continues all throughout life... it is always thier wisdom, thier loving touch, thier tender hearts we seek when times are bad. when times are good they are the first person we wish to share it with outside of our own homes. I loved this piece as it shows that well. thank you for entering and good luck
Hugs, Suzi -
Such a sad but beautiful poem, I can tell that you love your mom. Good luck in the contest
Theresa
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thank you, that comment made my day
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This is intense. Such a lovely poem that is captivating. Well done dear poet! One of my favorites that I've read all week!
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i know of worse, and i know of better, pretty average i think
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;-; This is very sad, even though my mother is still alive, I feel the same way you do. Whenever im crying she never sees, and if she does she just asks why Im crying, and when I tell her why, she thinks im being a selfish little brat-nice mom huh?
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Awww... That was soo cute! The ending was beautiful. This piece was really sweet. Well done. Thank you for entering.
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This is just wonderful...and the person above me is absolutely right- its an extremely emotional piece...brilliant work!
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Awwwwww, this is such a heartfelt write....It brought a tear to my eye....High on meds or not, you have written a truly emotional and beautiful piece here...
Love it
Lynda
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