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Why?

How many times did you say you loved me?
Did you have to break my heart?
Did all those kisses mean nothing?
You've totally torn my heart apart...

I can't belive i thought it would last
How could you ever do this to me
Looking back on our long lost past
I feel all the pain and misery

When i look into your eyes
I see none of what i feel
Do you even hear my cries?
I thought we had a deal

That we would never ever part
And that you wouldn't ever try and leave
I guess i should've known from the start
That you would walk and let me greive

Author notes

I dont even know why i wrote this but i was in a extremely weird mood and i did so ....
Written July 28th, 2006

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  • Loves Own Requiem
    July 28, 2006
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    Relatable

    I can relate very much to this poem hun - it's a great write and COMPLETELY relatable^_^ Great job on this - I like the undertone of frustration with sadness as the main focus along with the age old question: "Why?". Keep writing!