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What I don't know

What's becoming of me
Whats becoming of you
What's becoming of us
And all the things we do

What is there
What I want
What is happening
And what is not

What I know
What I don't
What I say
And what I wont

What you feel
What you say
What's in your head
And what's fading away

What I can't comprihend
What you don't even know
What I want to feel
And what I don't anymore

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Written July 28th, 2006

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  • Purplelove
    July 28, 2006
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    i have felt this way so many times its nice to read it in a poem i liek the way you wrote this one the questions i think you ask so many times with no answers and no end
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