after the rain
rainbow, air cool, purified
new beginning
Author notes
Written April 6th, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- Succint Profundity by Alces Linguista.
300 points, ended August 4, 2005, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Nice. I love thunderstorms. I like how you transition slowly from the factual description of the scene, to the more subjective reality of rebirth.
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This is lovely.......it is pouring here in Michigan right now....severe thunderstorms.......and the air has cooled quite a bit........
Nice Haiku.........best of luck in the contest.........
Leance
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excellent job
thanx for sharing -
Absolutly wonderful
MMMM
I love the smell after a rainstorm!!!!
So refreshing and renewed!!
The scent of dirt
washed in rain fall
so cleansing...............Laura
Lovely work........Hmmmmmmmm if Sherry is my sis, can I call you Gramps to?????
hehehe 
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Myron you are right Atr was a typo.Thanks for comment.Bill
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optimistic
i take it that Atr should be Air?
a nice meditation, in the classic 5.7.5 format...
a refreshing poem, capturing a moment of optimisism...
well done... -
Pretty Gramps
Hugs,Sherry
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