Abandoned, some may be,
but as far as I can see
you still have those
who remain close
as a slave,
you have
light
Within
the prison
I see you there
May my light shine down
upon your beaten and bloodied
soul, so that you may heal wounds
inflicted by loneliness and know that
you will no longer have to suffer completely alone
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Written July 28th, 2006
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I really like the way you wrote this! it is also a wonderfuly written peice
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Loneliness
Accepting the fact that it happens does not mean we hael. Friends are so important. Nicely penned
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There's nothing to it, silly. It's not even a real form. It's just the way I wrote it.
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Aww, so pretty pretty, Rose. Beautiful work I really need to try this style sometime if I'm brave enough
Yeah.
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Thank you for your comment. Some people need light shone upon them.
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I love this poem... i see how it reflects on someone trapped in there own depression with noway out.. but you .. you help shine oight on thier darken souls...I love the imagery you have in this poem as well... very unique... great poem....
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