The flowers tell me a story,
he makes it all so clear.
No words are said between us,
but pink flowers are just given.
Is this the end for us I ask.
He looks down, silent,
incapable of speech.
Finally I get it.
He has just moved on.
But flowers tell a thousand words,
he was capable of none.
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I like flowers!!!!
Written July 28th, 2006
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Thankyou for your comments everyone! Personally I liked the ending few lines but not the rest of it! Thankyou again and I hope I get round to reading lots of your poetry!!
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Words, unspoken shouts out loud at times,
Captured with a heart drenched in love,
Great Job
""But flowers tell a thousand words,
he was capable of none.""
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Nice
Sort of sounds like St. Valentine's. It has a pretty flow to it. -
Yep, I know that feeling well. You expressed it very well, I liked it a lot
don't u just hate it when a guy isn't man enough to say something?! (although, there is a time for silence...) NMNM
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we all have flowers that tell us things, a messages in their colour or even condition will speak of its giver ... loved this
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Sweet, sad write. I hate it when boys have no guts to say whats on there mind. Keep writing
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i really like this very sweet and yet sad but a beautiful sad great imagry i could see it in my mind great job it is short but perfect
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Excellent
Merry meet,
This is a wonderful poem. It is short, but very well written. It contains a universal message that all will be able to understand, regardless of age.
Excelllent!!
Amythest
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