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War

It began with cane and Abel
The war of the holy land
For centuries they would fight
Blood shed for land
Or was it something more,
pride

Pride a power so deadly
It could lead to chaos
Since before Jesus
To the present day we have fought for this land
To protect and defend,
For what

For by prophecy the end is clear
A sweep of the land
Till all is near
Near to the end only the chosen will stand
So why are we at war,
I can't comprehend

Is the end here
Should we all begin to fear
Fear the end of our days
No more to our ways
The war will have its way,
Till the end of that day

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Hi, my name is **deathbysuicide08** im 15.
below is a brief description of my writing.

According to christain belifes war was technicly created by cane and able. From then on many things as pride, revenge, and desire have lead nations in to war. For what ending cause though. Because in the end there will be a final battle between good and evil, God...and the Devil/Anti-Christ. So it is sort of pointless to fight and waste lives now when in the end the world will end in war, a final battle to deside all.
Written July 28th, 2006

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  • James R
    July 28, 2006
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    Avery nice write my friend which is a plesure to read thanks for entering the contest.