Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

On The Beach

lets take a walk on the beach
just being side by side
ecstasy within reach

 

watch the sun fall beneath the ocean
bodies pressed tight against one another
gentle caresses leading to that blissful motion

 

bodies entwined, sand everywhere
hands on random body parts
take control, pulling your hair

 

begging for more
squeezing your supple chest
a little pain for you, ecstasy galore

 

the softness of the breeze
cooling the heat
of a body on her knees

 

looking like a fallen angel from behind
desire taking hold
thrusting hard and furious, no interest in being kind

 

how you beg for more from me
simply fuels the fire
hands holding your hips, slapping your ass intensely

 

waves crashing in the distance
increasing the rythym of our passion
harder, faster, more .... explosion of pleasure in an instance

 

shaking hard and tightness gripping
holding on llike never before
side by side gasping for air sweat dripping

 

pleasure from pain
clouds come
and

we
feel

the
rain

............................
.....................
..............
...........
.......
.....
...
.

Author notes

Written July 27th, 2006

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 11 of 11

  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    July 25, 2007

    Edit | Reply

    YUM!!!

    I can feel the cool air caressing my toes....as I....

    Better not delve any more


    A gorgeous piece...loved the imagery and how I managed to picture everything you described!!!


  • TheDemonEve
    June 29, 2007

    Edit | Reply

    Exquisite

    Lovely, hot, delicious, intense, such sublime animalistic lust and desire. This is a flawless piece, and the form is neat and clean. Everything about this poem is simply superb. Well done!!


  • samwynia
    October 4, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    this was amazing! you are truly a gifted writer.


  • annamoy
    July 28, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Yes, it sounds as if you needed that rain to cool you down! Very sensual, erotic poem that compliments the picture perfectly. Well done on this, an enjoyable read.

    Ann.

  • DemonicAngel
    July 28, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    A wonderful peice, very tasteful and not vulger. The picture complements the poem beautifully, thank you for sharing.


  • xX Dear Diary Xx
    July 28, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    WoW bery hot!!!!! keep up the steamy work

    ~Di

  • Son of Jim
    July 28, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    I generally like a more subtle erotica, not your fault, but the colors and small print were hell on my eyes.


  • Playful Angel
    July 28, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    wow! this was great, very hot and sexaul. i loved reading this. it was well written and painted an image in the readers mind, the rhyme worked well, and was not forced. well done, keep up the great work. take care


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    July 27, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Very hot and sexy write my friend...wow! So intensely passionate and the beach is an awesome place to play
    Thank you for sharing...well done!


  • GirlNextDoor
    July 27, 2006
    Edit | Reply

    Marvelous!!

    This was amazing!! so sexy yet not vulgar! You are n amazing writer with a way for words incredible! Ive never done it in the beach and you made me want to go and do it . . . want to feel, to experience all those sensations you present us in this magnificent poem!. My favorite part is:

    "looking like a fallen angel from behind
    desire taking hold
    thrusting hard and furious, no interest in being kind"

    This is simply sooo hot!! great work!! hope to read more of it!

    Lots of hugs and kisses GND

1 - 11 of 11