I am drowning,
In dark haunting melodies that speak of lost love,
The dark, soulful notes,
Spin and twist inside my head,
The dark, soulful notes,
Dance, turn, and burn upon my heart.
I can actually feel the despair in the notes,
Then it repeats it’s self,
The sound binds me with it’s whisper,
I am a prisoner,
The music stops and plays again,
until the bitter end
Author notes
Ever hear that song that just seems to talk to you?
Written July 27th, 2006
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I'm glad you liked my poem.
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I havent been able to read your work lately do to illness. I come back and you blow me out of the water. AWESOME!!!
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Liked your poem, very real, very intense … it also has a kind of musicality about it… I liked that a lot… it seems that you can almost hear it’s melody in your head … very nice put …
Keep on writing
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