Mia's Voyage
A cargo ship out on the sea
It's belly full of goods
The crew consists of ne'er do wells
A bunch of thieves and hoods
"The ship is cursed" I heard them say
All sailors would agree
But in the end a motley bunch
Would take her out to sea
The sea is rough the wind is hard
She rattles and she creaks
A steady flow of briny foam
Runs down in brownish streaks
The decks are hushed there's not a sound
The crew is fast asleep
But just below deep in the hull
There comes a gentle weep
Amid the shadows of a lamp
A crate stands all alone
Inside a box that's made of oak
And trimmed in polished bone
A whispered voice speaks soft and low
To no one it would seem
But yet it fills the mind asleep
With sweet erotic dreams
"Come to me love, I need you here"
"I'm feeling such despair"
"Please come to me and let me out"
"To take a breath of air"
"The voyage long, and I've been here"
"Sealed up inside this box"
"Come to me now my dearest love"
"And open up these locks"
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A sailor stirs as thoughts drift in
His dream seems oh so real
He hears the voice that speaks to him
A voice that he can feel
He rises up from his warm bed
Intent and hellish bent
He's on a quest to find the voice
Perhaps it's heaven sent
He makes his way across the bow
The sea is rather still
He finds his way to lower decks
Alas to do her will
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"I'm over here come to me now"
"I've waited oh so long"
Her voice is soft and soothing
As she sings her night time song
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With trembling hands he reaches out
To open up the crate
But little does he know right now
That he has sealed his fate
The lantern flares a bright white light
The air is calm and still
She steps out of the shadows
To use him at her will
Her eyes are dark alluring pools
Of wanton lust indeed
Her lips anticipate the flesh
That will fulfill her need
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"My name is Mia of the dark"
"I'm so alone down here"
She said those words with just her mind
And drew the sailor near
Her parted lips so succulent
So wet with liquid lust
Expose the need she hungers for
Her body writhes and thrusts
The dance begins erotically
She savors every drop
She rolls the sailor with a force
She now is on the top
In ecstasy they move as one
The rhythm finds it's beat
She can't control her wanton lust
She needs to feel his heat
With sweet sensations of the night
As bodies move as one
She lunges forth, she drinks him in
Alas her deed is done
Copyright 2003 By Johnny Wheeler
Author notes
This is part of a series of writes I did on this character 'Mia'
--Johnny
Written April 5th, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- Story within a poem by Stac.
300 points, ended June 1, 2005, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Congratulations! This is very cool
I enjoyed reading this, maybe a little to much 
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Very well written. Of all the story poems I liked this one the best. But I am not the judge. Thanks for sharing. -
THIS WAS WONDERFUL! Sorry for the short notice...but I'd like only won piece per person. So I am sorry to say you must choes. Thanks,
STAC
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Good poem. I like it. It is about vampires if I am correct. It was a little erotic if you read it once but if you read it twice or so you can see that she is drinking his blood. heh. my dirty mind. Good poem and good luck on the contest.
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Wonderful write..I think I will look for the others in the series..kind of feel mis-placed...need to read the others first maybe..brilliant...Peace Muddy
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Thank you for entering my contest! This was a beautiful poem. It just wasn't exactly what I was looking for. But it did cause me to read many of your other poems. I admire your work so much.
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This is would make such an excellent story. Held me captive all the way through Good luck in the contest
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hmm reminded me of the scene in dracula when they were on the ship. what is it about vampires that holds our attention?>
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She stands in the cargo bay her thirst quenched...for the moment.
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I agree with SomberShadows.Its wonderful!
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Great
Very good! This piece is descriptive, alluring, and captivating if i do say so myself. It's erotic, yet very tasteful, which i think you have a great talent for! I thank you ver much for entering my contest! I want to wish you all the best of luck! Thank you once again for entering!
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Very beautiful, Johnny. Very. It's like, a story in a poem (duh :P) and it's great. I really enjoyed this one. Sounds much like books I used to read. For some reason I've stopped reading stories in books and have become attached to poetry.
I loved this one
-Kayla
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The stories are all different, yet they all contain the same "villain", though the more I read the more I fall in love with her (not in a sexual way). I like how all the stories have the same rhyming scheme. It makes all the different stories connect.
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Your talent continues to amaze me my friend. This is a very finely crafted story. Very dark and intense. I'm enjoying reading your Mia series very much.
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Seductive write
mmmmm. I really needed to read such a captivating poem. Bravo! You kept my attention the whole way through! Very seductive write.
Her eyes are dark alluring pools
Of wanton lust indeed
Her lips anticipate the flesh
That will fulfill her need <--- recommend adding her "every" need.
Wow! I will read this again... Just to make sure I didn't miss any.. hehehe -
This is amazing.....
I love this series....
i am now awaiting further writes of Mia.....they are wonderful
Ann -
Yet another read of your to stir the senses Johnny. It's a wonderfully intersting journey you are taking us on.
I'm away to read part 3 now.
Very enjoyable ( tales of Vampires still make me feel uneasy though)
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A steady line, the finest rhyme, images dark abound,
The vampire cruised, the sailor abused, sucker wins the round.
But for all of that, a little flat? No twisting punching line?
Fever built, blood is spilt… but only one salt at a time?
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Gosh! i thought that your kiss poem was great.. you're a creator of images, adn of thoughts.. and of great tales that seem old.. but are as new as a born babe!! I love it.. mia is so enticing, and rarely can u actually see the person.. or the character in a poem as closely as you see mia.. you can practically smell her adn hear her voice!!
Beautifully written!! i'll have to read more of your poems!!
love ya!
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Fantastic Write!
Most certainly will agree with the above Johnny, I anticipate the pieces you put out for us to read. I'm definately attached to your Mia writes, and pleased to see that you have posted up a new piece in what is becoming her saga. I absolutely adore the thrill of the hunt and most especially the capture at the end of your piece, your words thrill and leave your readers with a breathless wonder when through. Excellently written, and most enjoyable.
BTW I think you mean her in this line below,
She said those words with just here mind
-Angel aka WoundedAngel.
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One of the first poets of AP to look for is you Johhny, this is really great, like the way you tell your tales, so hauntingly and beautiful, and thus I'm a great fan! Can't hardly wait for your next, Thanks for sharing! ~Rena~
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you certainly do love your mia! this is so nicely crafted! i enjoyed it as much as i did The Song of Mia! they go nicely together, though im not sure i liked what she says, it's awfully repetitive of the first poem, unless that was your intent!!
great creation here!!
Nyx...
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