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4 Years too far

Stars catch my tears
in their wonderful luminosity,
the sky radiates the sorrow within
I look up to the sky and wish,
"Grace me with his face, one last time."

The passing of your soul
seems so long ago and yet,
so horrifyingly close to my fears
why has it come to this?
My mind yearns to hear you..

4 Years too Much,
4 Years too Far
Away from You.

Pictures and sweet memories
haunt me countless nights,
sweet words of encouragement
replay through this restless mind,
yet I never want it to cease.

If you could see your Baby-doll
you would be proud I know this,
this girl matured, grew up
knowing what she wants,
inspired by you & mommy.

4 Years too soon,
4 Years too long
Helplessly Alone.

Sweet entity graced by the Mighty Omega
you left this world,
to be released from torment
as much as it distresses me,
I thank His Majesty.

Someday, our souls will meet again
only this time in the graces of God,
Wait for me, PawPaw
I'm coming soon, to see you,
I love you.

4 Years long ago,
4 Years so distant
When I Lost You...

R.I.P- Glenn Rose McQuinn 1916-2002.

Author notes

This day is the 4th year without my great grandfather.
Written July 27th, 2006

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  • Miss Yorik
    July 27, 2006
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    So sad and full of longing! This one caught my attention especially - it's so massive:

    "Wait for me, PawPaw"

    Thanks for the read.


  • dying-gothic-roses
    July 27, 2006
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    i really like this the repetition of "4 years..." and then the slight change was a really interesting effect it does hold a lot of emotion and i feel like there is a deeper meaing beneath the words

  • guitarguy17
    July 27, 2006
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    very good babe...i held back the tears when i read this...couple got out...it shows alot of emotion