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hour of magic

there are places that have rain over 200 days a year.
my heart is one of them.
when the last raindrop falls
and the sun comes out,
anything can happen.
it is a time when rainbows emerge
things can be lost forever
or even found.
and maybe... maybe...
i can fall in love again

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Written July 27th, 2006

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  • Reframing-Quill
    July 27, 2006
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    Awesome...!

    This is profound and eloquently inspiring. You've taken a fact of nature and incorporated it into the very creative fibre of your own character, in a most revealing and hopeful note besides. Awesome~. This is just awesome! Thanks, precious, this was quite a pleasurable read and a masterful inspiration