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Stop judging

The conflict of races
Is a raging war
Constant battles
Injustice fights fought
And uncountable words yelled
What is is it?
Why dose our color make us who we are
Why dose a low class white man be called "white trash"
Why must a black man know how to break into a car
Why must a Mexican be called a "be-no"
Color is just a reason to disclud someone
Ste same with age, sex, blood type, and even hair color
It's all a way to put people in different groups
Just like the people you hang out with
If your a "jock" and your seen talking to a "nerd"
People look at you different
If you where all black
"your now a goth
and you worship the devil"
That's not always true
And that's not fair
Men should be able the where skirts
And not get called gay
Women should be able to cut there hair short
And not be called a dike
I should be able to say "i write poetry"
And not get looked at weird
I guess the point of all of the is,
Just take the time to get to know someone
Before you judge them.

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Written July 27th, 2006

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  • SamuleD
    July 27, 2006
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    could have been better.

    Sixth line down you put is is. Might want to fix that. And the low class white man line is all messed up. And dose should does in that same line. And We might want to keep blood types they're used to save peoples lives, not alienate anyone. I have also been so far unsuccessful in finding anyone black or otherwise who can break into a car for me. Is ste a new slang or is it just a typo. And you spelled disclude wrong. You used where instead of wear twice. And in the women’s hair part there should be their. The third to the last line the should be this. Nice point at the end though. But we have heard it before, loads of times. So if your going to say it again try to say it in a way that will make me care.