An echo of your steps on the pavement
Chills down your spine
Two fingers brush your hair as you pass a shadow
Press them to my lips
How is it that I want you?
On your back, sleeping or freezing?
Awake so I can hear your whimpers
I took the time, why would I let you go?
Eyes at your window
Watching your chest move with sleep
Hand prints and white stains on glass
I'll be there when you leave
Who's that behind you?
Author notes
JUst a little taste Option 3
I was stalked before so I know how it feels.
Written July 26th, 2006
A contest entry
- Give me all you got... by ShatteredExistence.
341 points, ended August 2, 2006, 17 entries
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this is realy good!! i was once stalked before too.. its a scary feeling.. not knowing whos watchin you. great job on portraying that in the poem!! keep up the great work!!
<3 ash -
Lol!
Wubs Nikki -
Spoken clearly with few words. That is a gift. This is one of your better writes Nikki.
Speaking of stalkers.....Bunny says hi. >.<
lmao!
<3
*hugs*
~Helena~ -
Thank you!
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I defedently know the feeling of being stalked and you have captured it so uniquely. I love your style and choice of decriptions. Awesome job. ^^
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