It makes me sick to think
That innocence can be lost in a blink
How can such a horrible act
Be a common fact
You ask what it is I am getting at
As I knock you on your ass flat
Of your little girl I am talking
And her self-esteem you are destroying
How could you do this I emplore
I smear you face on the floor
How could you say you love her while you break
Her delicate minds sake
You plead for me to stop
But I silence you with a boot stomp
You say its father-daughter love shown another way
As you begin your evil little play
How can you conssumate such a devilish act
And expect you seed to love you back
Can't you hear her silent screams
While you defile her nightly dreams
When your corruption is done you say it is her fault
So justice is going to be served without a malt
Your pain filled screams are lost on me
As I heap torture and torment on thee
Author notes
Written July 26th, 2006
A contest entry
- YAY my first contest!! =)~ by BeautifullyBroken42.
419 points, ended September 16, 2007, 19 entries
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Very powerful write. Child abuse is a horrible thing and it pains me to think of any child having to go through such a horrible experience. ):
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wow! What a lot of anger in this. And I can't blame you. Child abuse is the worst thing ever, and it's so disturbing. I hope to never come across it in real life. Very well written - you could truly feel everything you said. Good job!
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nice job! it rocks! and i'm glad u entered! so good luck!
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Your poem was really good to begin with, so, what the hell, I'll applaud
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you are an amazing writer i do have to say...and i think its wrong how fathers can get away with it too...alot of times in my small town i see more abuse then sexually but there was a few insodence here so we have seen it once or twice...but you did an amazing job and i hope and pray that one day their day will come when what they did comes back to them! great write
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It's innocence not innosence. The line where you say "As I smear you face on the floor" it should be "I smear your face on the floor". You have a simple rhyme scheme, which gives this poem a steady flow, although it seems you had some trouble rhyming at a few points. Also, I felt the emotion as I read this poem. And maybe the red font with the black background added to the emotion for some reason.
Over all, I really liked this poem. Good job.
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I have a lot of friends who hhave had this done unto them. It makes me sick to think that this kind of thing can be let happen. I am a father of a beautiful little girl and would never dream of doing such a thing like this.
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wow thats really good. I was abused sexually since i was like like 5. Your an amazing writter, but you dont need my words for it.
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