I am not sure what it is about you,
If I only you really do.
Between the sparkle in your eyes,
and looking at the stars in the skies
Thats when I knew.
You love my favorite country song,
And you knew it all along..
You always can get me to smile,
And it usually stays for a while.
Thats when I knew.
You say I am beautiful,
and that I am so wonderful.
Yet something keeps you away,
Happiness will come one day.
Thats when I knew
Thats when I knew everything would be alright.
Thats when I knew, youd hold me tight.
Thats when I knew
Author notes
This is kinda sorta in a wierd way related to one of my friends....they know who they are...
Written April 5th, 2003
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I must agree with HayHay, poetry is a form of expresssing you soul, little the little voices and inner child, inner demon, or whatever may be the case out to play and allowing a purgeing of emotions for the benifit of others. Good poem and I think you are a better writer then you give yourself credit for
blessed be;
shaggy wolf -
Is this about Jacob too? I can't tell!
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Well you may think it is kinda weird but what I think is its POETRY and personally theres no poetry that is WEIRD because all poetry is is your feelings so don't matter what other people think about your poetry cause if you are immpressed with it then its done WONDERFULLY and just to let you know i like it to
Love Alwayz
~*Hayley*~
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