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Avenue

We went for a walk down the avenue
Nervous banter/looking for excuses to be close to you
January 13th of 2005
There on Mill, it's where I learned to feel
I learned to feel again that night

We went to a park on the avenue
You were cold so I wrapped my arms around you
My heart skipped a beat when you turned to face me
There on Mill, Time stood still and there was no more city

Just you and me, I couldn't breath
Your smile took my breath away
The scene was set and our lips met
I remember it like it was yesterday

It was then I fell in love with the girl of my dreams
It was that perfect moment just like in the movies
I never thought I'd ever experience what you made me feel
I'll always remember the night that I fell in love on Mill

I fell in love on the Avenue

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I know, I really need to stop writing songs about Jay....but I can't help it, anywho, what do you think?
Written July 26th, 2006

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