Take these wings and make them yours
Give me those tears and make them mine
It hurts to see you cry
It hurts to see you die...
I fear the blood trickling down
You fear the tears falling to the ground
It hurts to see you cry
It hurts to see you die
Don't say a word I'm still here
Don't let me go I need you there
It hurts to see your pain
It hurts for you to see mine.
So I won't show you the tears
I won't let you see the pain
I'm not going to let you cry...
I'm not going to let you die.....
Author notes
Written July 26th, 2006
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>< I know I do that a lot. _._; I skip a word when I type it up...Thank you for pointing it out though ~~
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Wow I could feel the emotion in everyword...Only one mistake
"It hurts to see cry"
I think you meant....It hurts to see you cry
Common mistake
....But this poem was really good...I've been though this before..So I can relate..Really nice job!
~^Sara^~
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