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All Alone

All alone...
On my own...
With no one there...
There to care...
You can't hide it...
You can't fight it...
So what's the point...
The point in trying...
I tried to make you love me,
But it didn't work...
So why am i still here!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

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Written July 26th, 2006

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  • Buwan
    September 9, 2006
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    I really like it; I like the repetition of the sentences ending to tell the "story". Really unique.


  • Wish I could write
    August 1, 2006
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    It's an amazing poem!!! I connect with it. You are amazing!


  • Peezzi
    July 26, 2006
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    I know what it means to be alone. I reaaly love it