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Presence, Poet Divine




Presence, dear poet Divine
I hang off your every word
They carry a Gracious shine
Indeed, poems the best that I've heard


Your wisdom is most astounding
Your innocence, so refreshing
An echo of Love resounding
The feeling I count as a blessing


I treasure your gentle accounts
Laugh at your playful dispositions
You bring joy in copious amounts;
Great insights into your transitions


I doubt this will swell your head
For your humility stands at the fore
Your blessings in all that I've read
Have transformed everything that came before


I came to AP broken hearted
From the treacherous game of love
Through your kindness my pain has departed
As I glide on your wings of a dove


You dance with the maker of joy
Your hands and feet are "His" tools
Your Heart is the "real McCoy"
I wait patiently the next of your jewels







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allpoetry.com/poet/Presence
You won't regret this!
Written July 26th, 2006

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  • Presence
    September 30, 2006
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    My Blessed Soul,

    Your coming to this place was as a gentle wave crashing upon the shore... what a treasure the tide did bring! It is no small secret that I hold You and Your wondrous words high... few are the Freinds in life that truly touch our Soul and pull on it like the moon upon the waters. There came, with this tide, a treasure... more precious than gold. A wondrous Soul full of Love and though she had been battered by the stormy seas of life, no froth could hide the precious Gem Inside.

    Tara, my dear Friend, I thank You with all my BEing for this wondrous poem. All Your words are precious to me... yet how can words turned my way not be all the more special? Blessed Poet, Blessed Friend, Blessed Universal Love... Thou art a wondrous facet of the ONE!

    I am so glad that we have crashed upon the same shore.

    As for the gift that has crossed the ocean and landed in my hands and warmed my heart... such words will have to wait...

    All Love and blessings to THEE!

    ~P


  • transcendental baby gold member
    July 31, 2006
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    Tara! What a lovely tribute to that scally-wag of a gentleman Just kidding ... he is the absolute best of men and you've done him wonderful justice here ... this is lovely


  • MyrddinEmrys silver member
    July 26, 2006
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    What a beautiful and heartfelt expression of tribute and gratitude for our Poet friend, Presence! I can see your friendship is long and deep, sincere and giving. I can think of noone more deserving of such loyalty and love.

    Be evr blessed and bright, Rod


  • Puppydog gold member
    July 26, 2006
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    SO SINCERE AND SWEET

    This is so beautiful Tara, so sincere and so sweet.


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 26, 2006
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    Excellent tribute to honor your felow poet. I am sure they will be humbled by your words. Great job with this.

    Thank you for entering and good luck
    Storm

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