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Rhythm of Ecstasy

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Mother Nature is weeping
And we are soaked in her sorrow.
As she cries out her heart
We come closer together.

We come to each other
With passion in our eyes,
And our lips meet tenderly
As I hold your face still.

With your lips working on mine
I fight with your buttoned shirt
Until your breasts are freed
And your blouse hits the ground.

As you rip off my shirt I lift you up
And feel your legs wrap around me.
You hold me to you tightly
As if I would disappear.

I lay you on a picnic table
And hover above you on my knees;
I barely brush your lips with mine
Teasing you into a little whimper.

My mouth chases a raindrop to your chest
Where your nipples lie taunt and sweet;
I lick Nature's tears from your breasts
Until your breath is almost panting.

My hands stay with your breasts
As my mouth undoes your pants.
I slowly pull them down kissing as I go,
But you move my hands and rip them off.

You push me onto my back and bite my lip,
As your fingers tease my nipples.
You kiss me deeply as you remove my pants
Then straddle me as you play with my breasts.

I urge you to get beneath me,
And I place my head between your legs.
I rub your clit as my tongue delves deep
And your your back arches wildly.

Your orgasm pours into my mouth
And I swallow it greedily.
You pull me on top of you
And finger me until I cum.

We kiss and pet each other
While the need grows yet again;
Then entwine our legs and face the sky
To beat a rhythm of ecstasy.

We pound into each other cumming together;
Then you fall on top of me and sigh.
We lie there kissing and petting
Until Nature's tears run dry.

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Written July 26th, 2006

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  • Teomni Zelitel
    December 6, 2006
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    wow. i really like this one. its filled with emotion and a great write. the only thing i didnt like about it was is made me miss my gf. lol. but i guess thats how you know its really effective. great write

  • Stoica
    October 11, 2006
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    Very beautiful...I loved the imagery and the whole idea of Nature's tears and whatnot. Interesting idea. Loved it...good luck!


  • XwasteOFpaintX
    July 28, 2006
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    wow this was beautiful. i loved reading every bit of it!!
    i loved "Mother Nature is weeping
    And we are soaked in her sorrow.
    As she cries out her heart
    We come closer together."
    wonderful.

    also, i liked how it was girl on girl.


  • raingoddess gold member
    July 26, 2006
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    This is a beautiful poem, very sensual, thank you for your entry in my contest and good luck.

    raingoddess