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Older but wiser??? ( story)

I was sitting on the couch in my best friend’s house watching the latest chick flick with her. It was a dreadfully hot day it had reached the triple digits in mid July. The air conditioner was working over time to keep the small single family home semi cool.  Even with the air conditioner sort of blowing it was still scorching in the living room. We were sitting in our very short very skimpy gym shorts and sports bras and we were still frying.



The movie was nearing its climatic end when the front door open.


“Anybody home.”

I didn’t even move to find a shirt it was just Angie’s older brother Cash. Angie and I  were twenty-one and cash was twenty-five as kids he had picked on us relentlessly but now we all just kinda got along. He was an outrageous flirt and loved driving Angie nuts by flirting with her friends at every chance.



“Well if it isn’t Angie and Billy. What are you girl up to on this devilishly hot day?” He said as he plopped down on the couch next to me.

Angie just rolled her eyes at him and didn’t say a thing. So cash looked over at me checking me out from head to toe.  He smiled that smile that only cash could pull off. Then he slipped his hand under the strap of my sports bra. He fell forward his face against my breast when his sister hit him with a pillow.


“ How many times have I got to tell you cash? She is my best friend not your stupid blow up doll you sleep with most nights  so back off.”

Cash didn’t get mad at her statement he just cracked up laughing.

“Blow up doll???!!!” He asked between laughing and catching his breath.


“Oh you two grow up will you.” I said

Finally the movie had ended . Angie got up and popped another movie in.  The movie wasn’t even half way over when Angie had fallen asleep.



I was laying there thinking about what I was gonna do for the rest of the day until Angie woke up from her nap.


“Billy what are you thinking about?”

“Nothing im just bored and now Angie’s asleep leaving me with nothing to do.”

“Hmmm well we could make out.” He said this with a smirk knowing how Angie felt about him with her friends.


“You really have a death wish don’t you if we made out and Angie woke up she would kill you slowly and painfully, very painfully.”


“So we can go up to my room and lock the door we’ll be back before she wakes up. Come on Billy have fun for a change, you’re always so serious about everything boys, school, work and the newspaper just forget everything and have fun with me.”


I looked at him for a minute not sure what to say  I knew what he was suggesting was a bad idea ,a really bad idea and I  was very aware that he was suggesting more then a simple  make out session.



“ Ok but if she catches us I’m blaming you, got it buster now move quietly so you don’t wake her up.” I got up and walked toward the stairs to  what used to be his bedroom in highschool, before he moved out and his room became the guest room. He followed close behind me  his hand laying gently on my waist.


Once inside the room we laid   down in the bed cuddled close and began kissing. Soon what had started as a simple innocent kiss was full of fierce fire and passion. His hands were roaming all over my body causing my skin to catch fire and the blaze already burning intensified. I felt like I was going up in flames. Our embrace was hard and animal like and before long our kisses and caresses got out of control.

I was mad with anticipation I had been dreaming about this moment since I met Cash at Angie’s thirteenth birthday party he was already getting ready for college and seems so mature so out of my reach and now here he is laying on top of me touching my breast and smoothing his work roughened hands over my smooth skin.







 I was shaking and shuttering with every touch, every kiss. He was beautiful if I didn’t know myself better I would think I loved this man but I had given up on love a long time ago.

Suddenly I was drawn from my thoughts as I felt him slowly entering me.

“Ooh billy you feel so good. We fit so perfectly together.”

“Faster Cash I want you to take me fast and hard please I need it.”

His pace increased and his thrusts deepened. I could feel herself climbing to my climax I thought my world shattered as I saw rainbows of colors before my eyes as cash's handsome face blurred in the furry of colors. I heard him grunt and moan then shudder one last time before falling on top of her.

Slowly I fell back down from cloud nine. I knew in that moment that I was very much in love with cash and probably always had been if I had told myself the truth.

Slowly i pushed cash and moved away from him and started putting my clothes back on.

“Billy  , what’s wrong babe?”

I didn’t say anything for several minutes.

“Nothing Cash get dressed before Angie wakes up and sees you.” I got up and left the room without another word. I  wanted to go home to think to sort things out but my mind was so boggled I didn’t know what to do. I slipped back on the couch just as Angie woke up.

“hey sleepy head.” I said smiling at Angie. Just then cash entered the room looking just as hot as ever.

“Hey ang don’t bitch but I just  want to know if you would object if I wanted to date billy?”

“WHAT???? What the hell??................... well I suppose that would be up to billy.”

“Well Billy would you consider being my girlfriend?????”
 

I smiled when I saw him crossing his fingers all he had to do was flash that million watt smile and I was a puddle on the floor and he damn well knew it.

“Yea cash I suppose a couple dates wont hurt.. But no promises you know I don’t do commitment.”

He came over and hugged me  tight and whispered in my ear. “ Oh but this time you will do commitment because I can promise when im through with you your never gonna leave.”

“Angie im stealing billy she’ll see you tomorrow.” he picked me up and carried me to his car. All I could do was smile.


“Its about damn time those two fools figured out they where made for each other... it’s a good thing I pretended I was asleep when cash started talking to Angie about going up stairs. I hope they live happily ever after.”


mental note: remember to wash those sheets ick gross!!!!!







(Haha this story has been a very long time coming ( no pun in tended jesh its been months since I’ve even been on ap long enough to post. Yes im aware there are typos and such but its like 3 in the morning and I couldn’t sleep so deal with it peoples. Love all my friends and fans on ap **kisses**)

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Written July 26th, 2006

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  • blahblah12
    April 16, 2008

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    AWESOME!!!

    that was the most intense 10 minutes of my life. you put me threw a rollercoaster with that story, but you also owe me new pants because i ruined my old ones.


  • BareBeast
    July 28, 2006
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    oh i loved this. it was so damn hot hey? Hooking up with a mates older bro is sexy as! nice story and I loved how there was a happy ending! always a great read.


  • my-masquerade
    July 28, 2006
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    Its a good story and entertaining to rad but the changing of narration style is confusing. I can't tell if both characters are talking or what. BIlly seems to be the main character but yet angie's name keeps coming up in random instances. IF you can straighten that out you'd have a very good story.

  • britt-chere
    July 28, 2006
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    thanks for the comment babe im glad you enjoyed the story.

    britt


  • jaws theme song
    July 28, 2006
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    damn, this is actually a storey worth reading, I wanted to be billy when I read it.

  • Poetic Hearts
    July 27, 2006
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    Amazing

    That was amazing. It made me lol when I finished reading it. Very well written even with all the typos. Keep up the good work. Daithian.

  • britt-chere
    July 27, 2006
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    Thanks everyone for the nice comments and the critism, dont be sorry for letting me know when i messed up . that way im able to go back and fix it. but like i said i wrote this early one morning when i couldnt sleep and just posted it. anyways hope yall loved it.

    love britt

  • Broken N Lost
    July 27, 2006
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    I am glad you are writting again. This is a really great story there britt. You never ever seem to stop to amaze me. You got the best damn talent a round. I'd would like to read a story about you an I it would make something really great to write about. So many thoughts and things to say. Great Job and keep on writting.

  • necremuusd
    July 26, 2006
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    yea i noticed that too you as the charactor goes from being called billy to angie a few times. and not to pick it all apart but, you started out in first person, by saying 'i' and then went to 'she' later on, sorta confusing but not really. its okay though cause i still love ya and stuff, im just trying to help you make a good story great


  • HisPrincessMaloka
    July 26, 2006
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    Is this true????? Daaaaaaaaamn..I've never read anyone write about a climax so well!!! He kinda seemed scary a bit, though....like a rapist....You may wanna make him a little nicer if it's a fiction....


  • July 26, 2006
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    Billy, he called you Angie...would he have rather been with his sister?

  • VintageEyes
    July 26, 2006
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    hm... it reminds me of the books i read. its cute and sweet and romantic and passionate. i love it uber mucho grande. yeah. **thumbs up** write more!!
    -KynA-


  • Kithnec
    July 26, 2006
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    omg!!! i love this write! i just wish something like that would actually happen once in a while...any ways...keep up the good work...~*~Charley~*~
    Edited on Jul 28, 11:50 because 'spelling error'.

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